Water's Cryistal

its a love poem 3 years old. (it is one of my first)

Wistful and untamed

Angry at none

Tonight we may die

Even though we know

Are love will

Stay For time to times end

Coming to the light

Reaching far and wide

In my mind we

Stay

Together

As long as the water lives

Lance and _______________ Forever to swim.

Author's Note

Please keep criticism to a low minimal.

Reviews

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Very nice poem. All the words flow nicely. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more of your work.
~Bridget~