Reawaken

Find your passionate side

Lost in time's tide.

 

Share your love's seed

Care! Always take heed.

 

Appreciate the others' passion

Life's only true fashion.

 

Around ignite a spark

Light against the dark.

 

Mend your last mistake

There's more to make.

 

Dry up that tear

Can't live in fear.

 

Feel no more forsaken

But only just reawaken.

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

What a great Rhyming poem, I enjoyed reading this poem. The rhyme of the piece am still screaming .. lol
Beautiful poem. The ending was so nicely ended up with the meaning of your title "Reawaken". Brilliant imaginary.

[Dhaye]

Nice couplets, Cat. I like the tone and the concept. This is inspiring.
I personally love this couplet:
"Mend your last mistake
There's more to make."---Humans make mistake. Nobody is perfect. When we have done something wrong, we must forgive ourselves, because we cannot move on if we won't do it.Sometimes, the best enemy of someone is himself.

I have a good read. Thanks for the share. Keep it up!

[Catlen]

Thank you very much!

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[Chris]

good thoughts but for me the rhythm seemed to stumble even after three reads.

[Catlen]

I've never claimed to be a poem. Just like to experiment with words. Thanks for reading.

[Chris]

It wasn't a ding on you...

[R J Askew]

I like the positive tone throughout .. esp in the last four lines.