SYROS LOVE DREAM

A woman of the sea

Castaway

Drifted into the arms of

An island of a man

Secluded

A hidden shelter, a Paradise.

Lost

Under the brilliance of sun.

Drowned

In a whirlpool of passion.

Breathless

They lie on the sand.

Trapped

In a haze of time.

Bound

In an eternity of kisses.

Author's Note

Credits for the title to my Mentor!

Reviews

[unknown404]

its so creative!!!! ................................

[unknown404]

its so creative!!!! ................................

[emmajoy]

'.. Breathless ~ They lie on the sand. ~ Trapped ~ In a haze of time.. '..

Can see a movie scene towards dusk, very soft music.. maybe not the vivid red, more a gentle blue. the occasional sound of birds and the evening tide stroking the beach. Your words are very real, you've channelled the emotions very clearly, very adeptly, Catlen. Smiling as i slide back into my rainy and very ordinary evening!

[Catlen]

Thank you, dear! I always appreciate your comments!

[emmajoy]

:) my pleasure!

[Antoñyo]

Reads like a dream.

Thanks for sharing!

[Catlen]

Thanks for reading

[Chris]

To me one word is just not fitting..."drowned".

The overarching flow and the fluid tones of your thoughts draw the mind well.

[Catlen]

Thank you. :))))))))))))