Unrequited Love

Your walls to break

I failed.

A love letter you

never mailed.

A song I sang

left unheard.

You're no lover,

nor friend.

You lived, I died.

You won, I tried.

Reviews

[JR Darewood]

I love the opening image, and the final four stanzas have just enough symmetry--not too little, not too much-- to give the poem a really nice close