Late Thoughts of a Broken Heart

It's been 149 days and I'm still not over you
I've tried everything I can think of, there's nothing left to do.

You said to move on 'cause I deserved better
But living without you just makes my eyes wetter.

Sleepless nights, crying in the dark
Are common occurrences since you broke my heart

"Forever" was the promise you made to me
"I'll keep your heart safe" so I gave you the key

In a broken world, you helped me mend
I should have told you, you were my best friend.

The fire you started still roars deep inside
And the never ending rain can't make it die.

Reviews

[Gee]

Now that is sad.Loved the rhyme and easy flow.

[Caustic_Dystopia]

Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and reviewing 😊

[terry smith]

love this!!! memories are the oxygen love needs...without them it will die, in time.

[Caustic_Dystopia]

At least that's the hope, thanks.

[Philip Muls]

You capture the pain of a broken promise by a lover, a friend. Very genuine and raw.

[Caustic_Dystopia]

Easy to write about it when I'm living it, thanks.

[Philip Muls]

I know the feeling, take care

[Another Mayfly]

That was truly beautiful to read, every word you said I can relate to. The eloquence of your writing made it very moving.

[Caustic_Dystopia]

So glad you enjoyed it😊

[alifeacoustic]

Sad, poignant, heart achingly beautiful write. Such sadness etched in every word. Thank you for sharing.

[Caustic_Dystopia]

Thanks for reading and reviewing 😊

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.