My Honeysuckle

As I walked the lush gardens,

A sweetness I smelled, 

At that moment my attention was held.

The intoxication of your fragrance filled me.

To consume you I felt I must.

But time was not my friend.

The harshness of winter came

and it destroyed everything I wanted us to be.

Reviews

[ChetPancakes]

Perfect, other than I might change the wording of the "To consume you I felt I must." line. Otherwise, this is amazing.

[V.I.C.]

@ChetPancakes

Thank you, yeah that line got me. lol

[ChetPancakes]

And I knew then, that I must consume you ??? or something along those lines. Like I said, it perfectly captured a feeling.

[V.I.C.]

@chetpancakes

Perfect!