Within Reach

Within Reach

Dreams and wonders are all created while you slumber.

Big cities and monumental buildings are all out of reach.

Destined for greatness?

At times it feel it can't be.

Off in the distance I see it, sometimes within reach.

I chase after it, tired and out of breath, fast my heart beats.

As I reach out and grasp it, I can feel it slipping between my fingers.

The fear of loosing this dream and wonder is all to surreal.

Perplexed I stand thinking that without a chance I can fight the habit of man.

"Give up and quit" they yell at me.

But a hold I take of this dream that is laid before me.

Reviews

[SVT]

I like the optimistic point this ended on, along the way I felt I could relate to this "habit of man" ---don't let the man get you down! Good stuff.

[V.I.C.]

lol Thank you... And no, man won't get me down, im more of a "against the current" kind of guy.

[A. Amos]

A graceful and eloquent write, Bravo,

[V.I.C.]

@A.Amos

Wow, thank you for the compliment. It's very encouraging.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome buddy!