Three Word Curse

"I hate you.",
Those simple words possessed my mind,
turned themselves over infinitively,
skipped like a broken record
until tears squirted from me.
No, I'm not the picture of perfection,
but you make me want to puke.
"I hate you" is the only thing I know
Sorrow, the feelings stem from you.
I do not enjoy knowing these thoughts.
But you are selfish, impudent.
Everything you represent haunts me.
All your petty actions taunt what I stand for.
The chains of defeat, impalement by emotions,
this hate, this "I hate you" curse,
the sickness you make me feel
from the pit of my stomach, pitching
I can never be freed.

Reviews

[Emily]

This is a nicely flowing piece. Even though there is a lot of angry emotion running through each line, you've made it a concise piece of work. You've done very well, also, with the punctuation. I can feel the anger in the strength of your statements in each line.

Very nice work. I hope things improve.