Love Song of Sea and Sky: A Marriage in Iridescence

About a volcanic sunset on the ocean. The ocean is maculinized and the sky is feminized .

Horizons blushed violently

at the salt spray's sweeping gestures,

each gem was a token of ardor,

cast before the heaven's gaze;

she wore them as vesitges of their courtship.

 

Through each prismatic stone,

reflections of the other's face.

Until merged as one,

they consummated twilight

and climaxed at dawn.

 

separate, only to be joined again

against the land's escape.

Author's Note

Still a poem in progress...finished for the moment until someone notices the rut its in. Please help.

Reviews

[Leah]

A convo perhaps? Betwixt the two. Very awesome start though.