Raining Silent Moisture

I wander through your thoughts

with eyes full of silent moisture

falling down on those walls

you blindly live behind.

I listen to the loneliest heartbeat

convincing your other half,

inner peace.........

has been found.

Planting seeds in your mind.

I wonder should I leave this place

never return to visit

your future full of pain,

or continue raining silent moisture every day.

These walls you live behind are a fortress

that drain my soul,

no matter how hard I try,

alone.....

I cannot make them dissipate.

Author's Note

*Image.........by Neva Flores

Reviews

[Bobbie Coelho]

I feel the last piece is very telling and very painful to read:
"I wonder should I leave this place
never return to visit
your future full of pain,
or continue raining silent moisture every day.
These walls you live behind are a fortress
that drain my soul,
no matter how hard I try,
alone.....
I cannot make them dissipate."

This moved me very much.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Bobbie :)

[Amberlight]

. . . is that you in your illustration?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"the silent moisture" really screams out at the reader...a heart that just can't let go.

nicely imaged piece.

[Luke L]

wow lovely piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Luke :)

[Luke L]

no problem lovely lady what's your name?

[Veronica Chandler]

Neva this image is as exquisite as is your smooth and silky poetry... mystically enchanting and full of skillfully painted imagery.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Veronica :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So many wonderful lines in this poem! Love your word usage. Excellent writing!

Neva, I have a birthday coming up, want you send me a poetic pen like yours"LOL"

Your a very talented poet!

[KAREN]

Your phases are always awwsome. Your poems can always be felt when read!
100/100

[Muse]

Beautiful image to inspire beautiful words....

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you. Wasn't sure if using my own face was such a good idea. Love you! xoxoo

[Muse]

Of course it was a good idea. You are a work of art.

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

xoxoox

[mandy]

great poem

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

Thank you Mandy :)

[Tarry Franck]

Love the image by the way - Great job and great job on the poem. It seems to me that it's hard for you to turn your back on someone because you realize how much help they need, you have a big decision to make...to go or stay.