My Heart Bleeds in Every Shade of You

I hear my fate

surrounding your every touch

and my heart bleeds

in every shade of you.

Because of you,

the colors of my life

have become

a golden sea of happiness,

your sweet love........

breathes into.

You fulfill every dream

that has ever exhaled

into the deepest parts

of my heart.

Dearest,

my soul runs to you whispering,

“I have arrived

with no end to my trust,

from your side..........

I will not part”.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Your words are so lovely they take my breath away! The title sets the tone for the poem and you carry it through with a golden sea of happiness as your soul runs whispering........I hush my sounds and hear your devotion and love shouting 'cross the sea of love!!

[Weeping willow]

Very deep emotions flow through your words,beautifully expressed;-]

[silent poet]

Beautiful! I once was here, *sighs* not for long but endured all the same.. Written so nicely

[KAREN]

A beautiful piece of work! I feel the emotions.
100/100

[MadBubbles]

Its very deep and dark like the colour of the night sky...ITS WONDERFUL!

[Bronwen Cox Hollinger]

This reminds me if my style... It's very deep.

[redflutterby]

You paint a beautiful picture here...this piece is wistful and sweet. I loved it!

[Lily Finch]

beautiful interesting love piece.....

[Distantview123]

An expressive write, with some interesting imagery.

[Allen Smuckler]

I could have stopped at the title and I would have been content...
Whenever I feel like reading great poetry Neva...I know I can turn to you...
I trust I will always be rewarded....and I am
Another in a line of great writes
allen