Dream Weaver - A Collage of One Man's Poetry

Dream Weaver - A Collage of One Man's Poetry

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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A collage of the works of Dream Weaver as interpreted by me - Changefulstorm

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I have given all the best of me
Time for you to create your own vision
It’s all for one and one for all to be

I am poignant, weak and weary
Still love has been a confiding stranger
Who twists and taunts effortlessly

Smiling backwards in these winds
I’m watching buffalo herds softly graze
As the world watches me begin

I have seen an unconditional love
Cut jagged shards that made me bleed
Tossed in sorrow and pain thereof

Come and whisper secrets to me
Faceless, in your stillness you are bold
Yet still a majestic sheen I see

I meander in freely from the East
Escalating woe and desperately divided
Unbutton your soul, for my feast

Constantly racing thoughts collide
Swirling in a disheveled hue of betrayal
Grasping with hands which hide

I can see the warmth of magnificence
In the languid pools of your lovely eyes
Forever they will hold significance

Yet continuously through monotony
Flesh is being stripped down to the bone
Frustration is in the rainbow I see

Just a drop of relief I pose for in thirst
Some precise analytical picture of inspiration
Listening for deaf ears to be reversed

Corporeal delights among desiccated tears
Lie hidden in a loneliness obscured and rejected
Still walk like a man, sing with no fear

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
A collage I created from interpreting and using many of the words of Dream Weaver's poetry. He can be found here: http://www.writerscafe.org/Once%20Bitten

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This travels time with soft blinks.I could feel that search for those glimpses that make it all worth while. Your poem was a glimpse for me, it revives my enthusiasm. Pieces like this are a priviledge to read and as the reader... the receiver of those precious rewards. Thankyou you are very talented.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you so much for writing this my lovely poet, This is going into my favorites. Had to read this a few times to absorb each mesmerizing line.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dang it all, Neva...now I've gotta go read Dream Weaver's archives because you wrote such a fabulous poem from his work. See what you've gone and done now? Just kidding...thank you for pointing me his way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... You just blew me away. This is perfect Neva but as I said you do have a magical pen. This does so describe the charactor I have come to know as Dream Weaver amazing as he is, what a beautiful tribute you have created for someone well deserved... He entertains us all with the dreams he weaves for us all to read : ) Oh and I love the picture it so suits him...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is so good and great tribute to such a wonderful writer...this was astounding...excellently done..

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this section..the picture it paints of beginning..."Smiling backwards in these winds
I’m watching buffalo herds softly graze
As the world watches me begin"..it triggers pictures of White BUFFALO CALF WOMAN...When the world began in stories...

white buffalo calf ..creator and sustainer of this world...prairie grasses blowing freely...raven meetings on the tundra...it began.



Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice work. I should read some his stuff.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is just beautiful and a wonderful tribute to another's work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh wow! Yes..this is something else Neva! Beautifully done :) A perfect tribute here, wonderfully so! xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique concept, a very nice tribute. I am inspired.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was done quite well and I love the imagery and the solemn tone to this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..