Disguise of An Inferno

My dreams burst slowly into entities that wake the sands of time

On those nights when I meet intricately woven memories

I find admiration inside of a shameless delicate need

Upon a shrine created by gentle eyes to please

I never knew an inferno could be disguised in the sweetest music

Entwined within the pleasant taste of a foreign darkness

Full of such wonder that walks alone and unplanned

Leaving me with no escape or want of release

Have I been shrouded in a pretentious cloud of helpless feelings

Where I sweetly drown in your conquering ocean of bliss 

Softly tossed by symphonic waves of your voice

That sings into my delicate need of your kiss

Yet, no metallic notes burst into my dreams or this song I hear

I am not denied in the unfolding of your unearthly wings

Enter into this room where I now dream of you 

My inferno of memories I kiss as I sing

Author's Note

*Artist Arian http://www.lovesemporium.com/catalog.php?cid=133

For the Creative Poetry Group using the words: burst, inferno, pretentious, symphonic, metallic (which I hate) and unearthly

Reviews

[Tom Benson]

I was torn whilst reading this piece Neva. At one point I thought of it in terms of two lovers, then there was an undercurrent that it was more of a spiritual meaning and intended for a higher place. Interesting use of the nominated words and well composed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

After being in a love duet it is hard to sing solo again, especially finding your voice again. Great use of metaophors.

[brenda]

i like it it is really beautiful!:)

[Sher{alynn} Veron{ica}]

The seraph qualities of past loves. Btw who is the artist of the illustration? Its remarkable! A beautiful complimentary piece to your grand words :)

[Not Available]

I like this, its different yet mesmerizing, going to my favorites. :)

[lostboy]

do are needs die in time or do they grow.. an inferno begins with a spark..our needs and our wants are tied together and our feelings sometimes come before both.

[Larry Dyson]

I like it..a whole differenttake on the word stream..