Kiss of A Crimson Poppy

Twirling in aromatic silken bliss............

Last night I sweetly dream't of fragrant flowers
In a changing kaleidoscope a whirl
Twirling as I yielded to their stunning presence
Thrilling as they gently swirled

I twirled and twirled inhaling the freshest heaven
I never knew could possibly exist
Lost inside an unforgettable aromatic world
My senses will never forget

A touch of satin rose petals brushed my cheek
As purple violets tickled my nose
Crimson poppies slipped though my fingers
Gently kissing the tips of my toes

I believe I found heaven in my dream last night
Twirling in an aromatic silken bliss
When I felt the touch on the tips of my toes
Of a crimson poppy's kiss

Author's Note

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Reviews

A beautiful dream to have ! It is very different from your other poetry but it is a very nice change ! It shows you can have a deep, well worded poem but also be carefree and simple; yet, no matter what you write, it comes off as elegant and lovely. Something as peaceful as flowers can make anyone feel uplifted and happy.

[Steph K]

What a beautiful use of a poppy as inspiration. Playful, fun yet it screams depth. Your work never disappoints. Beautiful!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

The flow was stunnly beautiful. You are a artist of writing and dreaming of the Earth's beauty, and the memories that come along the way. The emotions where descriped smally, but I could feel them tremendously.
Wonderful, wonderful job.

[Helen]

Beautiful!
A kiss on the toes is important...
by a crimson poppy...
exquisite!

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like this piece a lot.
Great imagery.
Well done and thanks for the RR.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Lily Mae]

Well hello.miss sexy pants.. I love it.. ;)xx and it makes me smile for you ...xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful rosy imagery I get, beautiful piece, very uplifting :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like this piece. It's lovely...and favorited.

[EMF]

I'm left with a warm feeling, a positivity. An uplifting piece that leaves me feeling... lucky. Lucky to be alive, lucky to be here, lucky to do what I do. And as always lucky to have read it.

[Robin]

*smiling*

[Rene Velez]

fun and playful writing...