I Do(nt) Love You

A.N: yea. i know it's written weird. It's on purpose. so f**k you if you don't like it, because I actually like this more than most of the others I've written.

With this knife,
I thee end,
slice clean across
your throat.

With this gun,
I thee end,
A hole right
through your head.

And god, I
hate you so,
and god I'll
free myself.

Well f**k, you
just won't die,
Well f**k, I'll
try again.

So I stab
your black heart,
or pull again
the trigger,

another four
or more


times.
 

Reviews

[Kelley]

This was great! Should be a song or even on a plate...lol

Great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Rachel DeHart]

I love this. And I love how it is written!!!
These lines sent shivers through me
"And god, I
hate you so,
and god I'll
free myself."

Keep up the amazing work!!