Thrice Broken

Have you ever sat slumped against a wall,
Your view fixed upon the distant sea,
But your tear filled irises see nothing,
A lead weight boring away at your gut,
A slight tightness of the base of your throat,
Raised heartbeat ringing in your ears,
And a single tear upon your cheek?

The grey shores are deviod and bleak,
Nothings new as you fall to your knees,
Arms tensed out to the grey sky,
Back arched out pushing the head back,
Eyes wide open in a furious blaze,
Mouth wide open in a silent scream of rage,
"But Is This The Right Thing?!?!

Smash your hand down heedless of the pain,
Ignore the fire shoot up your arm,
Feeling the pain in your chest,
As your heart splits in two,
Close your eyes and let your lashes meet,
Silence broken by the guttural screams,
The screams of a thrice broken heart,

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this poem had a really great mood, and a voice was definitley very dominant in this peice. i loved it, thanks for sharing.

[YouoweYoupay]

Ouch, I could deeply feel the disturbed emotions in this poem. Great sounds and imagery. Loved it.

[Sam]

This is amazing. I love your style of writing. This poem is really really sad but it's beautiful and well written too.
"Have you ever sat slumped against a wall, Your view fixed upon the distant sea, But your tear filled irises see nothing"
I kind of want to say that, yeah I did. I think I can understand the emotions behind it a little. I won't say that I completely do, because I hate when people assume to know me. So I assume to know no one. I love this poem, I really do, no matter how sad it is ^_^