Dream On'

Free Verse poem about Dreams

Dream with all your heart 

Dream on till you cant dream anymore

Follow your dreams

No matter how hard

Or far you have to travel

Dream on till there are no more memories left

Dream till your life is over

Live you're life

With the dreams you want

And you want to accomplish

Don't let anybody tell you

You can't

Never give up on your dreams

Follow them

Don't run from them

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

If I read this somewhere and didn't see a picture of the beautiful girl who wrote it, I would think that this poem comes off as a wonderfully inspirational poem that should be read by many on this site!! It's the essence in writing poetry that we find such a state of freedom in wanting to branch out, make sense to someone, Love, and keep our heads above what may try to keep us down. Great poem!! Beautiful, Charliee.... xoxo -Mark

[Charliee]

thank you:)

[Patrick Henry]

Easily, welcome.... If you ever find yourself writing a poem that you want critiqued to find mistakes and/or whatever, just ask. other than that, I Love being on your page, Charliee!! : ) xoxo -Mark

[B-poet]

A very inspiring & uplifting poem meant to motivate anyone who has the courage to follow their dreams in a world full of uncertainties. Great work. A inspirational write & read. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I agree with the wisdom of the words. Good dreams and goals are needed.
"Don't let anybody tell you
You can't"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ency Bearis]

A good logical poem with message, nice verse to ponder.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is good advice here...couple of typos.."Live your life" and "till you can't dream anymore"

simple but solid in philosophy...sometime think about playing more with metaphor using dreams as personified entities...how they invade and coax and hope that we will follow them.

nice write.

[Charliee]

Thank you for the advice:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sorry...that first line sounded like i was saying what i gave you was "good advice"

i meant what you wrote in the poem was good advice...i just happened to catch those couple of typos...

[Steve]

This consists of some very good advice. Nice!

[Charliee]

Thank you:)

[missJRed]

very inspiring :)
let's chase our dreams ^_^