A Magical Dream

Is it possible? i ask myself
Good things are not to be questioned and i let myself with the flow..
An immense controlling power your wink has on my heart beats,
Making me shiver nd my cheeks heat;
Your burning eyes with desire mirror your thoughts,
By the connection we share;
I feel the words are so not needed to talk;
Please lock me inside the cage of your arms where i find peace,
Your touch with tenderness makes me go weak on my knees..
I wish the time paused when you smile your
Oh so special smile;
With you i shall happily walk down the aisle..
For a moment all the saddening urge to see you vanishes and flies,
Oh lord, i don't want to open my eyes;
If good things happen only in dreams
I would sleep forever to dream you.

Author's Note

I wrote something like this for the first time so being an amateur this might not be even close to perfect but i thought of sharing it :)

Reviews

[Christa]

A few grammatical mistakes, which are easy fixes. I believe this will speak to many, to anyone who has dreamt of the one their heart, body, and soul desires.

[Charvi]

Thank you very much!