Ink Black

A Poem by Chase Weik

Not all is lost

Her tears stain the floor

She's alone in the darkness

Someone worth saving

© 2016 Chase Weik

Author's Note

Chase Weik

This is my first haiku so I really hope that you guys enjoyed it! I'm very open to any and all constructive criticism! Thanks for reading!

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I really like this! Deep emotion in few words. Just great!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dust That Drifts Through Wind

Dust That Drifts Throug..

This haiku may be short, but it has a deeper meaning to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this, I can really picture the girl. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very deep with good simplicity

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it.
It's simply...Perfect!
I totally suck at haiku...and that's frustrating, because they're so totally cool.
I love when someone does them well.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it!

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Added on November 1, 2016
Last Updated on December 1, 2016

Author

Chase Weik

Litchfield, CT

About

I am an aspiring writer living in CT. and attend Wamogo Regional high school. I have always believed in writing as an escape or way to express myself, but I also just love to tell a good story here an.. more..