Rain In Heaven (rewrite)

This is a revised version of Rain In Heaven

Everyday it rains in heaven, even though it doesn't seem like it.
It rained extra hard the day you died, because the tears I cried fell as rain in heaven.
My heart, My soul, and everyone around me tells me it will be okay, but it's so hard to believe.
I pray that you go to heaven and see all the rain falling for you.
My tears continue to fall, and it continues to fall as rain in heaven, when I remember all our good times together.
Whenever I'm on a plane, I feel close to you once again, and the rain starts to fall.
I feel you all around me. The wind whispers your sweet whimpers of love.
It is my hope and prayer that you will see the Rain in Heaven.

Author's Note

I re wrote this because my dog died. I know that seems really pathetic but it broke me and tore me up.

Reviews

[zappy]

another great poem i could see how it tore u up