our right?

tonight
is trying
to be
        not just 
the place
          where
i always     
     end up
alone

tonight is trying
to be
that one 
place

where you 
     almost
          never
met me

aren’t we?
     i thought we
already
          stayed here

good nights
     candle lights
and all
most     
          mights

jesus
     we kind of
     got it

right
               right?

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

The one that almost almost got away. Brilliant.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, that relationship that almost happened...the love i almost felt for that woman i almost met.

lots of wonderful intimation in this piece.
and that candle, i almost lit...is almost burning up my bed because it almost fell over.

[ChemicalMadness]

this made me smile...thanks, Jacob.

CM.