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From your heart,thanks.

Like a wanning orb tottering its shape-

in the cloudless heavens of this dusk,

my infatuation towards the affection of-

phantom is wanning is this vale where thou-

coloured with bloodshed of transient joy.

 

To this valley,I gloan with rueful-

love  that doethn't heed thy gaudy love.

Reviews

[Thea]

Great usage of vocabulary...Keep writing!

[Rhea]

a begin with the end...... nice...

[Michael of Gilead]

i would challenge either of your reviews....

[Dayran]

A committment to the permanent, in a world that is constantly changing, from the one to the many and the many to the one. A poem about new beginnings.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I wanted to read more. You create some good visions. I like the way you use the words. Allowing the reader to wander into the words. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote