The Song Bird

song birds

Morning light

Begins again

Never fails

Hope’s anew

Little song

Of bird

So blue

Lifts my

Spirit’s

Makes me

Fly,

Little dove

seeks some shade

Hiding from the 

Noon of day

Near the thicket

By the brook

So still Is she,

I hear her coo

And though she’s

Absent from

My sight

Her song

so soft

Says all

is right,

Light of dusk

Calms the wind

Water loon

renews her

song

days last light

glimmers low

And her song

of sorrow

Wakes the stars.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

stunning is the structure and content.

[Cherrie]

i do like this poem but iy needs a little smoothing out to help it settle into its pace, thank you so much for the kind review

[Erin Thomas]

I love the way you used a bird's song! It fits perfectly!!! This is so beautiful!!! Keep writing!! I love this!!!

[Cherrie]

thank you Erin

[Eloha]

How I missed your poems Nana! 4 little spots in the contest for you :)

[Gomer LePoet]

Nothing more beautiful than the songs of life's creatures. Beautiful birds once the monsters of days past as dinosaurs, who knew? :)

[Cherrie]

good morning and thank you