This---------------------------------Much

This---------------------------------Much

A Poem by Cherrie
"

the birthday parade

"

Who loves a gift better than a child?

 A smudge of cake upon her chin.

Hello Kitty boots of pink and terry robe with swans,

topped off with a hat of straw.

Yes, children love

 this-------------------------------------------------much,

and payment is made with a kiss.

© 2012 Cherrie


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for a moment there I thought that you were comparing a 'gift' with a 'child' , dah, excuse me, no, this poem is gorgeous like the little girl featured in it...I felt quite moved.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Aye! Love kids, they're low maintenance, hehe. I do so miss mine being a little one.

Good stuff!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie

13 Years Ago

just wait it gets better when they bring their own to visit
Nice. We all could use a gift and a kiss every once and a while:)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nicely written...how are u doing?


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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie

13 Years Ago

the summer has been a zoo but full of life :)
Sweet Sweet Sweet. We all could use more sweetness in our lives. Kudos

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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Cherrie

13 Years Ago

my 4 yr old is staying the summer with us
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Beautifully said

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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13 Years Ago

Scorchin' HOT!!! lol
Larry Dyson

13 Years Ago

sorry you left..Laury
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13 Years Ago

Thanks Laury....I will pop in from time to time....hope all is well
They do if they are girls...This was quite lovely...and you are right, Children adore gifts and they also LOVE giving gifts...it is natural

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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie

13 Years Ago

yes the simple love of a child nothing sweeter
Dr. Wood ?

13 Years Ago

where does it all go?
Cherrie

13 Years Ago

now that I'd like to know

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Cherrie
Cherrie

LA aka lower alabama, AL



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..