Many Voices from Thunder

wonderful rain today and we needed it so

Why today I fear it so?

     Why so loud what’s it for?

         Nuisance loud stops my game.

            Soothing sound brings the rain.

                Chariots racing in the sky.

                   Ions in motion as I wonder why.

             

Reviews

[A Soapy Mess Stories]

I can relate to this...good write...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you've registered this one as a story, the meaning of lons please? i love the clever shape.

[Cherrie]

thank you that should have been a poem :) and Ion: an electrically charged atom or group of atoms formed by the loss or gain of one or more electrons when the bump into each other -thunder

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Never fear the unknown otherwise you will always be trembling... a very profound little poem.

[Cherrie]

we had a thunder storm yesterday, and I love the sound of thunder but i was thinking of all of those that dont