A Sundog

a windy day

Laments of air rave through the leaves, as the grasses and the wind share a moment most blended the graceful reeds gather and stride like a carousel horse spinning on its axes.  This powerful breeze breaks into the lea cascading into the waters breaking white with shadows of gray. Surges of light, peer from the clouds tickling the waters adding depth to her sounds. Unmovable rocks disburse the peaks sending them flowing into creases deep. The rhythm of the tide sets beat to my heart and the lacing of light reveals a sundog.

Reviews

[Moflo]

This is great, wonderfully worded and so very detailed. I love the natural setting, its a great poem for this time of year, very descriptive and very nicely worded. Great job.

[Cherrie]

thank you :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was just wonderfully written! Any one who reads cannot help visulizing the sound and then seeing it all! Great use of listening, seeing and feeling in this poem!

[Cherrie]

Thank you I was watching the weather move in and found this one piece of the meadow playing over in my mind.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Welcome!

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a very captivating read and deeply intrigued.

[Cherrie]

thank you so much :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I was captivated by the title and greatly enjoyed the content, every word in fact, I loved it Cherrie

[Cherrie]

I'm so glad I was not sure about the title I started to call it "Laments"

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you Do paint...and wonderfully with your words.

i visualize all of this as if i am there.

[Cherrie]

:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love the sound of wind and waves crashing on the rocks. They can both be so soothing. Beautiful writing.

[roarke]

This is one of those inspirational pieces. Every word matched perfectly with every event and feeling. This piece is as close as anyone will ever come without being there. Pure cream.

[Cherrie]

I am so glad you like this piece I was wathcing the wind, meadow and water only wished I could paint. Thank you for such a kind review. :)