yielding

A Poem by Cherrie

Steinbeck contest

Rows of wheat bow their heads to the wind

Yielding to its will, so I yield to you Oh Lord.

© 2016 Cherrie

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charlie

I am reminded ever so thoughtfully of John 3:

"The wind blows wherever it pleases. You hear its sound, but you cannot tell where it comes from or where it is going. So it is with everyone born of the Spirit."

A nice analogy in this poem. Short and sweet - as real truth often is.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

thank you Charlie, I appreciate you sending me feedback.

9 Years Ago

I love how you mingled this poem with John 3

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charlie

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

thank you Charlie, I appreciate you sending me feedback.

9 Years Ago

I love how you mingled this poem with John 3

Greg Agee

Lovely, such a beautiful moment in a few choice words. Excellent my friend !!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you Greg.

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Added on February 26, 2016
Last Updated on February 26, 2016

Author

Cherrie

LA aka lower alabama, AL

About

I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..