yielding

A Poem by Cherrie L Bill

Steinbeck contest

Rows of wheat bow their heads to the wind

Yielding to its will, so I yield to you Oh Lord.

© 2016 Cherrie L Bill

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charlie

I am reminded ever so thoughtfully of John 3:

"The wind blows wherever it pleases. You hear its sound, but you cannot tell where it comes from or where it is going. So it is with everyone born of the Spirit."

A nice analogy in this poem. Short and sweet - as real truth often is.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

thank you Charlie, I appreciate you sending me feedback.

10 Years Ago

I love how you mingled this poem with John 3

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charlie

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

thank you Charlie, I appreciate you sending me feedback.

10 Years Ago

I love how you mingled this poem with John 3

Greg Agee

Lovely, such a beautiful moment in a few choice words. Excellent my friend !!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you Greg.

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Added on February 26, 2016
Last Updated on February 26, 2016

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Cherrie L Bill

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I am a published poet and love poetry. My goodness is I am going back too country living, I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. Plus my new love has given me a new lease on life. I als.. more..