Help Me

      Hand to  

      Encourage

      Lifts the soul

      Provides ownership

      Make easier the task

too Ease the load.

Reviews

[Bacchus]

The title is a cry
and honestly I think this is the first acrostic
I've actually enjoyed. It was so gentle and renewing. Like the words answered the title.

[Cherrie L Bill]

thank you, I wanted it to be a simple and ring true.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done acrostic...Paying it Forward comes back to us at the end...

i find rhythm and flow perfect if you take the "it" out of third line...but also the next three lines want singular verbs...provides, makes and Eases and then that "to" in last line could be deleted too...and it is a true acrostic...try it aloud that way and see what you think...

j.

[Cherrie L Bill]

I will thank you

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We are lifted by helping others up... a really inspiring acrostic.

[Cherrie L Bill]

It did not flow like I would have liked and I thank you for your review