Dead of Night

depression

Longest day, darkest night, said so often in the dead of night.

No reflection in my soul, no memory to hold on.

Light of day, stings my eyes, like statue of clay, I look stone cold.

Longest day, darkest night, said so often in the dead of night.

Reviews

[mou]

depression and darkness with those powerful words ,remind many chapter of life indeed..sometime feel only the stubborn heart is the master of all
beautiful write

[Cherrie]

thank you so much Mou

[mou]

it is my pleasure indeed :)

[Inject Positivity]

Depression, it does feel like the dead of night. Even the days feel like covered with darkness... And as you said the light of day does sting to eyes being under the clutch of depression...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Cherrie]

thank you, the image of a lonely statue helped me form this poem

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I liked the rhymes and feeling in the imagery. Tyfs!

[Cherrie]

I wrote it for a contest for depression, and thank you :)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!