alone

senryu

wild heart races free

carved names slowly fade away

as love promised dies

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, it will die, good read, well done.

[Cherrie]

I'm getting ready to make another about old ghosts. The bad news is I should be doing my taxes :(

[Neville]

When less is more
senryu rules
pen runs dry with applause

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Great Senryu pieces always delivery - and - your falls into that category! Loved it ... :-)

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Cherrie!
Such poignancy from one so tenderly affectionate and gentle in her nature, sure does reach right in and grab the heart in a stirring grip.
I know you've an endless imagination, Hon, but this one feels so genuine … yet, I suppose excellently rendered, highly creative poetry is supposed to have an intended effect on its readers.
It is rare one comes across such a powerfully impacting Senryu, Cherrie … especially, in perfection of count, form, emotional timbre, and such a deeply captivating poetic voice.

So sad to see good love go bad, Cherrie … hugs to thee! ⁓ Richard ;/

[Cherrie]

I like to mix it up and try not to write the same thing over and over again. Your generous words were very kind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow...yes, and one day someone will see those barely visible initials carved into that tree and ponder who put them there and whether they are still together...well done senryu...
j.

[Cherrie]

Thank you, i like simple crafting they offer

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn girl you nailed it. What a punch your words deliver.

[Cherrie]

Senryu's are fun to make