Come On Let's Dance

some elder-something fun

I love to watch you move

see your swagger

you've never lost your groove

Baby, I loved you then

Still love you now.

Come on baby let's dance.

What

You've thrown your hip out.

Sure, I'll get the door.

Author's Note

more humor

Reviews

[lightsong]

haaaa! YOU are really good, You made me smile WIDE.. lol but still it's a sad truth..., what's more beautiful than to still love the same, whatever comes, whatever happens, how beautiful it is to see two elders still holding their hands gently, passionately... oh my wide smile becoming unexpectedly gentle tears now...

[Cherrie]

thank you :) yes it is that sad funny truth of aging.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Well, that put a smile on my face when I needed one. thanks :)

[Cherrie]

I'm glad to hear it KC

[Pete]

Lol. nice one. clever. growing old is not for sissies as the say. :)

[Cherrie]

Got that right :)

[Ghost]

Oh, you made me think of how old I am and yeah when I was younger I loved to dance... now I would do more then throw out my hip lol... Fun write, nice job bring me into it..

[Ardra]

Funny poem n sweet
With age these will be a part ...
No one's growing younger .. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i sort of feel like this sometimes when i dance now....even though i play tennis quite a bit..the bones aren't as fluid on the dance floor...damn AGE....

[Cherrie]

It's a conspiracy

[Davidgeo]

Senior citizen love poems are an untapped genre... as we live longer poems like this become truer.

(which is pretty f****n' hilarious regardless... right?)

[Cherrie]

Yes I think so

[Cherrie]

I find the emotion of humor hard to capture on paper

[Coyote Poetry]

Never too old to dance. Need more drink to keep the pain away. I enjoyed this poem. Dancing is always nice. Make us feel wild and free for a few minutes. Thank you Cherrie for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

I'm glad you liked it. Humor is always fun.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Cherrie and I liked this one.

[Neville]

Talk about laugh, you got me going now, bless ya........N

[Cherrie]

a little aging humor, the other day i broke a blood vessel dusting lol

[Neville]

Its all in the mind and the bones & everything
in between, innit..........

[Cherrie]

lol true so true