Home Among The Lilies

Water lilies

Tarn of glass or churning tide
you clean the water as you ease the mind.
Your gift is your beauty.
You are a springtime treat
and I long for your blooming
my flower amongst the reeds

Reviews

[Pete]

pretty nice home. doesn't get much more peaceful and comforting than that. pure, floating tranquility you give us ... :)

[Cherrie]

Thank you, Pete. I enjoyed the mental image this created and I am glad you found it peaceful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful and mournful...and i really like the Slant Rhyme you use in this...adds to the allure. Reminds me a bit of Ophelia.
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

One of my dearest friends was from Bull Shoals AR.

[Cherrie]

We love it hear between the white river and the lake it is awesome.

[Cherrie]

I really like that you enjoyed the flow and rhyme.

[angel]

Water lilies; I was told they were lotuses, but no...the lotus rises above the water, the water lilies lie upon its surface.
When I was ten, I went to a museum and saw Monet's water lilies painting. Never having seen an impressionist painting before, I concluded that Claude Monet was as nearsighted as I was!
This is a lovely, tranquil write,Cherrie. Very nice!

[Cherrie]

His painting is what I had in mind and thank you :)

[Patricia Wedel]

a charming poem when Lillies heal a broken mind and soothe the soul of love forborne...
truly, Pat

[Kelly Scheppers]

Nature is a most abundant gift. We needn't seek happiness when it is there before us for the taking. Such a lovely sentiment in this piece, Cherrie!

[KCthelastboyscout]

I hope finding beauty in such a small thing brings you all the happiness you can hold inside.Nice to see you writing again

[Cherrie]

Yes, it's nice to be writing 86 days was a long dry spell. But who's counting:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nature has so many wonderful gifts. Appreciating them is where true happiness comes from. This poem say you are a very happy person.

[Cherrie]

Thank you, :) inner peace is one of God's best gifts I do find so much peace in nature.

[barleygirl]

Great details & imagery to paint a scene I may not have ever seen or imagined, but I love when a writer sees & shares aspects of nature (especially) that are new to me! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cherrie]

Me too, feeling that nature provokes is endless as well as timeless.
I'm always glad when my friends can join me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dear Cherrie. Amazing use of words.
"You are a springtime treat
and I long for your blooming
my flower amongst the reeds"
I love the above lines. Realistic and wonderful. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

Thank you, I've missed writing but am feeling refreshed and ready to get back to work:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Cherrie.