In Search of you

You are there, waiting for me.

If only I knew where that might be.

Your dreamy eyes make me weak,

I can’t wait to see that shade unseen.

Your breath so warm

Thaws my soul.

If only your name from tomorrow would come.

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

imagination welcomes creativity. Each line hugs those imagination. wonderful lines. keep it up

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you sometimes I read something and my own spin of if pops in my head, and wa-la :) I am glad you enjoyed this and thank you so much for giving it your review.

[Light and ashes]

Dreamy..... romantic..
like it.

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you

[Light and ashes]

You're welcome.

[McEltic]

Searching for a soulmate... how those memories start to flow and the blood reheats to the drum of a kindled heart. :)

[Cherrie L Bill]

Good Morning, hope you are having a great day so far, and thank you. :)I agree a true connection to another soul makes life a better place.

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem longing for something. I enjoyed it a lot.

[Cherrie L Bill]

thank you, I wrote this for all of those in search of true love :)

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are being a productive 'bunny' today Cherrie! There is a deep longing and mystery to this as it intrigues the reader to want to know more about the dreams of the protagonist.

[Cherrie L Bill]

I read a couple of poems written by younger poets longing for love, and it lead me here.