a Candlelight

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Mountain peak reaches

Light of day breaches

Valley’s crease holds

 sun's glow so bold

Flaxen berries

a blooming 

sky light

fading

waxen

wings

rest

low

till 

dawn

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is the time of year when light begins to make a big change around here, slipping behind ridges earlier & earlier, & then peeking up from ridges in gradations, next morn. Love how you play with words & form (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie L Bill]

Yes I so agree light and shadows change the look of everything. A painter could spend months painting the same scene spanning time and season.

[red93]

Very interesting formally, nicely put together, excellent.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you, Red. :)

[Kerra]

This is simply amazing, really enjoyed this write

[Cherrie L Bill]

First one. I may try another one. I kinda like the format.

[Cherrie L Bill]

And thank you.