Reflections

Standing in front of the mirror, I see.

What do you think I see?

Not I, but you, I see.

My love, I see.

I see, 

you.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cherrie... the kindness of your Lover is
reflected in you and vice versa... to complement
each other... and discover how potatoes and cream
with a little butter make delicious "Mashed Potatoes".
A little bit of old-fashioned Humor. Hope you and yours are Fine and Dandy.
Fondly, Pat

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love has a magical way of making you feel beautiful the way you are.

[emmajoy]

Staring from your original and focussed place. you lessen - decrease, the impact of self to see only what .. who .. you want to see. Happened.. happens.. brilliantly.

[Cherrie]

Thank you Emma. I really enjoyed writing this poem, and I really like the repeated words and how those words structured the image.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the honest tone and realistic feel of the words dear Cherrie. You led the readers to the proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Cherrie.

[Robert Trakofler]

I reflect on reflections all the time I can usually see the love but sometimes it can be a bit tricky to find

[Cherrie]

Yes I guess so like one of those pictures that hold two images in one. Some see the man some can see the old woman. While a few can see both.

[Lorry]

I knew that's what those ladies do, seeing a different world through the perspective of reflection throws up such a differing view of the world that maybe we should all be walking around with mirrors 😊

[Cherrie]

thru the looking glass, it would seem. Like Romper Room.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great format...it is like the mirror swallowing the image, then just reflecting it back....
so selfless, no ego here....just love.
j.

[Cherrie]

I have to admit I like the format, sometimes I will fuss over a writing. Other times the balance is there from the start (thank goodness).

Seeing past ourselves is key. With most of the young world looking out for no.1 is there any question why nothing lasts.

[Neville]

... How bloomin extraordinary .. great minds eh' .. exceedingly well penned my friend ..
Neville :)

[Cherrie]

I thought so too. Very cool.

[Neville]

....................... cooler than perma frost cool :)

[Seuwandi]

This poem's got a brilliant twist.Great job!

[Cherrie]

thank you :)

[Cherrie]

Our poems are a great example of 'nothing new under the sun ' just the twist we each give it. I still think it's cool. We wrote these two poems at all most the same time.