The Rising Cresant Moon

The rising crescent Moon drips golden rays of butter, 

and the Galaxy's Milky-Way churns a creamy treat. 

As fluttering eyes of rest chase a candied lightning streak. 

Fluff the purring kitten folds thunder into the brew. 

Echoing chatter from the evening train revibrates a fading boom.

Dancing images of Knights in battle spring from the canvas of stars. 

Then the silence of sleep comes with the fullness of Jupiter and Mars. 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Loving the expanse and beauty of your words. Have been taking night walks lately, so it's wondrous to see the sky alive in your thoughts... Wishing you an autumn unlike any other.

[Cherrie]

There is something about a evening stroll or just sitting by a campfire. It really feeds the soul.

[barleygirl]

I love how you start out by whipping up a dairy frenzy that sounds & feels delicious! Then you paint the arresting boldness of such a night sky (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie]

Yes nothing better than a celestial buffet.

[barleygirl]

"Celestial buffet" . . . love that!

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie... you are the Ultimate Poetess... so charmed by
your descriptions in the Night Sky. I delight in the Moods of thunder and
lightening... like the purring of a Kitten. And when Morning breaks...
it may be sunny or grey... depending on the Wind in the Willows. gently, Pat

[Cherrie]

The kids always like when I make bedtime a story. Truth be told I do too. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Milky Way, such a classic candy bar, and you mention the Mars bar...
well at least the planet...I don't want to eat the planets, they probably are not that sweet.
and Mars might be too hot.
but a feel a lot goes on up there, and much we do not know about.
I like the image of the chattering train.

j.

[Cherrie]

There is something magical about the sound of a night time train.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Posi tively brillant. I love the moon snd am really loving this poem

[Cherrie]

:) Thank you I picture a crescent roll dripping with butter and just folded everything together.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Cherrie. A delight to read this lunar offering. Loved the description and the imagery is beautiful. The kitten was the icing on the cake. Lovely work. Hope all is good in your world.

Chris

[Cherrie]

Really this popped in my head after I read Margie's moonlit limerick.

[Chris Shaw]

She's an inspiration to us all :)

[Cherrie]

It's funny but as a rule the inspired has little to do with the source . But I love when it works that way