Mingling Prayers

Heaven’s tears

freely flow, falling fast.

Mingling with the prayers of men.

Making a celestial mist of praise. That dances upon the wind.

As the waning moon, yawns for rest.

His fading smile slipped away,

to return again at the end of day.

The finishing touch of morning peaks-


With- sunrise's simple splendor,

swathed with morning dew.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What I love the most about your imagery is how the mist of all these combined tears does not feel like a bad thing, but simply a joining together under shared experiences (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie]

The other day we had slight mist and over the next ridge was tiny bits of fog drifting upward. It was just so lovely.

[poetgurl]

Wow, this is just so touching..... I can feel the emotion

[Cherrie]

Thank you K

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

This is how heaven must feel like , the caressing touch from above gives a toasty warm feeling on the palm with nature heavenly goods the " Sun and morning dew "
My favorite lines :
Making a celestial mist of praise. That dances upon the wind.
As the waning moon, yawns for rest.

My favorite lines in the whole poem . The radiance of the moon truly is a reason for a nightly mist of praise riding in the chills of the wind . The poem is truly beautifully made .

Love Kathy

[Cherrie]

Hello Kathy and thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the flow of gentle words and thoughts dear Cherrie. You allowed the reader to feel and see the words. I loved the complete poem and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much I love the image of Heaven reaching down as we reach up.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Cherrie.

[Relic]

This is one of the reasons poetry is a great thing to read. Such nice words here:
" Making a celestial mist of praise. That dances upon the wind."

Beautiful. That line alone is one to enjoy and memorize.

[Cherrie]

:) I almost cut that line and reworked it. I'm glad I left it.
Thank you

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Cherrie, heavens tears mingle with the prayers of men. How beautiful those words are and how beautiful is nature in all its glory. From sunrise to sunset and all that is inbetween. Thank you for sharing the gift of your poetry.

Chris

[Cherrie]

I think so often people think of pray as a one way communication when God in Heaven is always trying to commune with us.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cherrie... the Sky is very comforting these days
when life is being threatened in many ways...
The Sunset allows us to pray for renewed strength...
come what may. Your poetry has brought a vision
to my Soul where Life is embraced with care and trust.
Bless you and may God keep you and your family in the Palm of His Hand.
tenderly, Pat x

[Cherrie]

The beauty in nature always draws me closer to God. I never get tired in the changing of the seasons.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cherrie... there was a full moon all night and it lit up the bedroom... I assumed it was a time when our Hearts change and become aware of the way our Universe is designed... to experience changes and be prepared for the future... knowing we have come so far like a Star. tenderly, Pat

[Cherrie]

We saw that beautiful moon as well it filled the livingroom with light as it hung suspended in the window. It was awe inspiring.

[Einstein Noodle]

beautiful ... especially love the "Mingling" between God, Nature and man .. the result of tears, prayers, rain, mist and turned to dew .. soon to be caught up again to the heavens by such a sweet sunrise .. just beautiful, Cherrie!
E.

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much Gene. :)I think It's about that time of year for you to break out pen steeped in Autumn's notions.

[Einstein Noodle]

yeah! thank you for that encouragement, Cherrie! writing has not come frequently for months now .. maybe something focused on Fall would do the trick. ;) lovely poem! read it again .. savor the tears of Heaven mixing with prayers to become praise .. to cool for school young lady!! too cool!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Sweetly delicate like a spider web in morning dew. I enjoyed the read.

[Cherrie]

Thank you. You know I am sure I committed on your review. But I guess it didn't take. I really appreciate you reviewing this one. Again I want to say thank you

[no tell writer]

This is such a wonderful and beautiful write.....

[Cherrie]

Thank you Katzie

[no tell writer]

no problem