Without

Perfection so smooth.

Skipping stones upon thin air.

Without a ripple.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

When I moved to the wilderness a decade ago, not many people lived out here, but since then, it's gotten more populated (still sparse by most people's standards). So, there's much more NOISE now . . . power tools, on & on. That's why, when everything goes perfectly QUIET, it feels like your poem & I turn off the music & just soak in the quietude (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie L Bill]

My grandparents lived in the middle of the Mark Twain National Forest. It was waves of silence mixed with nature. I love that. Need that.

[Cherrie L Bill]

I was thinking you should write a story called; To Sur With Love.

[barleygirl]

NIIIIIIIICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful Cherrie. I also love your choice of posted image.to accompany your words and to engage our thoughts.

Chris

[Cherrie L Bill]

I've been having fun with these. I'm glad you liked it as well. :)

[no tell writer]

Such a wonderful Haiku, This is wonderful

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you dear Katzie. I've been on a 5-7-5 kick this week.

[Richard🖌]

Beautiful Senryu-ing, Lady Cherrie 센류

You paint such enjoyable enchantment upon the canvas of our mind's fertile imaginings.

KUDOS to you on this virtual miniature masterpiece! ⁓ Richard 🍃