Autumn's Veil

tall grassy meadow
bedded down an yearling doe
veiled in a wheat pall

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

That is a perfect haiku for any time of the year... Beautiful and brilliant

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Emma 😊

[red93]

Very nice and subtle Cherrie - Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you Tony.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Oh goodie, in the photo supplied i first spied a joey but indeed it is a deer! My eyes, you see.

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you 😊 sorry for the slow reply my granddaughter is in ROTC and I am constantly running 🏃‍♂️

[Relic]

Very nice to read this and see the picture. I've seen several deer in the cemetery on the next block. Some sleep in front of the graves at night.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you my friend. I have had little free time lately.

[Betty Hermelee]

I like your Haiku, and I see in my mind's eye a soft meadow with a young Doe resting or sleeping, covered gently by a wheat pall...soothing and lovely...
Best, B

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Betty
I find nature very relaxing as well. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one.

[Betty Hermelee]

I did, and I love nature too!
You're very welcome.
Best, B

[duff]

The trees are naked and the deer are running free. A beautiful time of year. Nice work Cherrie.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Our trees have not yet stripped down for Winter. They still don't Autumn’s taffeta (which I love). But the are most diffently running free and easy. My husband watched a buck swim across a cove the other day. I was so jealous I didn't get to see it. :) I hope you have a blessed day and wonderful weekend.

[keith]

the bambi season
begins this coming sunday
the deer will hide well

another well worded offering

[Cherrie L Bill]

Yes the deeper into the season the better they hide.
And thank you 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie... I love a place in a Meadow where a Doe has slept...
so I found your Haiku to be as soothing as a Nest in a tree where Birds
are safe... at least for awhile. tenderly, Pat

[Cherrie L Bill]

Yes, they are pure and gentle creatures that are gentle and innocent as God meant them to be.

[Kerra]

What a wonderful Haiku, love this