Nestled in the Meadow

The fullness of night nestled the meadow.
The firmament forgot to draw it's drapes,
while November's breath kissed the loam with lace.

Soon to be replaced by the morning sun.
The hart of the wood stoically rose,
rising in his grandeur to Autumn's zest.

Puffing adrenalin, and blazing smoke,
then lowing his head for the chase, he leapt.

Reviews

[M. J. Smith]

Wonderful images. Reminds me of the morning a deer walked through our yard. Stared right in the window, she did. Thank you for reminding me that there is still beauty in God's green earth.

[Cherrie L Bill]

What a beautiful moment that must of been. . When time slows down so we can share a moment with nature.

[M. J. Smith]

The best part was my daughter's excitement. She got to see a deer up close and personal. Moments like that are the real miracles in this world.

[JE Falcon]

Well said, and easily seen. This is a very well thought out poem.

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you Falcon

[Gee]

They are such magnificent beasts, do they mate at this time of the year ?
Lovely writing Cherrie

[Cherrie L Bill]

They are magnificent and yes it's time.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

An awesome poem set in a nocturnal time in the meadow. The last two lines personified nature or a deer in particular? Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled " Dandy randy Tom cat'

[Lydia Shutter]

The personification of nature is so lovely here. Your appreciation of all that is around you is powerful. I liked this. Lydi**

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Lydi :) and good morning.

[John the Baptist]

I wonder what was on his mind.

[Cherrie L Bill]

You know it. A buck almost bought my truck yesterday morning. Nose to the ground and on the hunt.