Hypnotic

Deibide Baise Fri Toin Poems 3-7-7-1 a fun Irish poetic form that utilizes simple rhymes with wild swings in line length. Here are the basic guidelines: • The poem and/or stanzas 4 lines aabb

they frolic
With dancing so hypnotic

Over hills that gently sweep
deep

Reviews

[Carola]

interesting, never heard of this form of poetry, but then of course there are so many different types.
your words remind me of the sound of music movie with the family dancing up the hill.
cheerio carola

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you so much 💓 I really appreciate the visit cannot wait to return the visit.

[Chris Shaw]

Never heard of this form Cherrie. Like what you have penned here. Your words create fine imagery in the mind of the reader.

Chris

[JE Falcon]

OK, that was different, fun, and I'll have to give them a go. --- This was a good stab at it too. Thanks!

[Cherrie L Bill]

I can't wait to see yours

[Einstein Noodle]

the Deibide Baise Fri Toin ... oh my ...i am thrilled to be introduced into this Irish writing form .. i am filing it for later use .. why wouldn't i?? my heritage is from the N. of Ireland and the Highlands of Scotland and a passing overnight in Sweden ;) "they frolic" ... smashing opening line says i .. and the faeries are out having so much fun .. but then the sweeping of the the deep .. good stuff mon Cherrie .. great read for me .. so glad i did not miss this and the education .. well done says i!
E.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Well don't keep us waiting. Let your imagination fly:)

[duff]

It takes skill to put your message in just a few lines and you did that here.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Duff 😊
This was a very enjoyable form. You should give it a whril. I think you would do well with it.

[Ken Simm.]

I'm not really into strict form prefering the freedom of the muse. But this is a lovley and layered selection of words. Words that fly over the landscape

[Cherrie L Bill]

Like you I like free form.
I don't want to be forced to use a certain word because the formula says so.
But I do like to work with forms from time to time. I think it helps my overall selection :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I've read several of them and wanted to give it a whirl.

[W. Barrett Munn]

I am reminded of a school of 🐠

[Cherrie L Bill]

I love watching birds and or fish milling along.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really absorbing description...
and the lines let us imagine the "they"...

what I see here are black eyed susans in Vermont...
i remember them, because you remind me with your words.
j.

[Cherrie L Bill]

It's a fun form to follow. I think everyone that tries it will be pleased

[William Michael Reeves]

Could you repeat that please? Deibide? Where are you, and the Owl , finding these things?

Ok.....

In valleys
Hypnotized hills clean with trees

In a ballet of rolling
Spring

You knew I was going to do that didn't you? It's a set up I tell ya'! I wonder how long we could keep the same thing rolling like never ending hills. Is there an Irish equivalent to Renga?

[Cherrie L Bill]

I knew you would:)
I've just been reading here and there and fell over yesterday's form looking at styles of handwriting.
This I knew about but hadn't tried yet.