The Bevy

wedge in motion land
spreading ripples soon dwindle
bevy allay low

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really love thiss. A beautiful senryu

[Cherrie]

Thank you Dale 😊

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How delightfully romantic. I was attacked by a big bull swan once. His mate had cygnets in a neighboring pond. I just stood my ground and walked right toward him like a predator. He changed his mind and his direction. We can't let the birdbrains push us around. ;)

[Cherrie]

We never had swans but I love watching them.
My grandpa Frank had geese and they were the best guard dogs around. They would send me running 🏃‍♀️ for my life when I was a girl.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A swan is like a goose on steroids. They are fierce, this one hissed and growled. I kept looking at him like he was a plate of fried chicken. Hahaha!

[Cherrie]

Lol I used to feed swans in a city park. So as long as you had bread it was all good.

[Richard🖌]

Gorgeously rendered Haiku, Cherrie ⛩

From beautiful artwork to choice imagery word painting, this one sings.
Though, there is one swan displayed, I know from my own experience the raucous noise a bevy of them can make … then, as suddenly calm and quiet as their stilled ripples.

Good stuff, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Cherrie]

I couldn't find the picture I wanted of a landing wedge so I went with the single swan. I really like this poem. Bevy is one of my favorite words (crazy I know). The word is just so gaceful..
You write such masterful haiku's I'm very pleased you liked it.

[Cherrie]

When we lived in Tulsa I use to go to a little pond with swans they are so majestic.

[Cherrie]

I was able to cut out 'the' from it.

[William Michael Reeves]

This made me think of the continents shifting for some reason. Constantly unnoticed.

Is that a typo? Dwendle

[Cherrie]

Yes it should be with an 'i' . I thought I fixed it already. Guess I'll try fixing it again.
read moreYes it should be with an 'i' . I thought I fixed it already. Guess I'll try fixing it again.
Swans are such graceful creatures. I love watching them.
Also bevy is on of my favorite words.

[Patricia]

That’s lovely Miss Cherrie! Such good writing here. Hugs!

[Cherrie]

Good morning Patricia and thank you 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Such a beautiful scene Cherrie. My kind of place. Swans on water can be mesmerising to look at. So majestic.

Chris

[Cherrie]

:) thank you and I completely agree. Swans are magical.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and wonderful use of description dear Cherrie. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

Thank you 😊
I found the picture surfing stock photos. Then put a filter on it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well dear Cherrie and you are welcome.

[Neville]

so very elegantly mirrored & writ ................... N :)

[Cherrie]

:) thank you Neville.

[Neville]

... my pleasure entirely :)

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

And the quietness could be clearly heard.

Nicely penned, Cherrie.

[Cherrie]

Thank you Kay 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they are pretty, and so graceful, like your pen.
j.

[Cherrie]

Ya know-
I started to use Wedge instead of Grace.
Since that is what they are called in flight. But wasn't sure it worked.

[Cherrie]

Bevy is a beautiful word