Morning's Trifles

Upon the vista,
Morning's trifles glean.
Day's wafting breath stirs,
tender blades of green.
Then boldly a cresting smile,
sits on the horizon,
and awakes hope anew.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

Cherrie, consider as a test taking out “of green” and just utilize the alliteration of breath, blades, boldly, and see what you think. This is a nice slice of time so I am not critical but curious.

[William Michael Reeves]

Time to catch up. Glad I did. The idea of a rising or setting sun as a smile is excellent poetic stuff! One of your brief poems that reads endless. Nice!

[lightsong]

Another Beauty from your sunray pen~ uplifting to the senses. filling the heart with hope🧡💚💛

[Chris Shaw]

The break of day and with it comes new opportunity. Yesterday is in the past. Today offers hope. Each new day is a blessing. Sunrise is my favourite time of day. This is a beautifully visual little piece Cherrie. Lovely work.

Chris

[Cherrie L Bill]

Good morning Chris and thank you I hope you have a blessed day today.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Yes the beginning is end for another day.
Thank you for sharing.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Mauricio

[Stella Armour]

each dawn brings a new start, sometimes it's like second chance to be good to yourself and others...

[Cherrie L Bill]

So true and hopefully the new day will be outstanding.

[Coyote Poetry]

I was sort of lucky. We had a 5:30 walk-up in my Army days. I was station at Fort Ord, California. You could see the sea, the moon and the sun passing each other dear Cherrie. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like.
Coyote

[Cherrie L Bill]

That is one of my favorite things watching the sun and moon sharing the horizon.

[keith]

would be so if true
looks to me mother nature is pissed!
bigger larger more dangerous storms
surging temps
might even be a vegan dismayed by damages done in our quest for meats!
but yes, the earliest of dawn gives a glimmer of hope, even if done in jest!

your consistency of write draws me in like a magnet ... so well done!

[Cherrie L Bill]

Hello 👋 just noticed you had stopped by for a vist and I'd like to thank you.
I agree with you about Mother Nature being in a foul mood.

[Robert Haigh]

Your last three lines made ME smile, Cherrie! I can just see mother nature smiling as she oversees the dawning of a new day. A delightful write!

[Cherrie L Bill]

First light is my favorite time of day. Life always feels new and freshly adorned.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

An awe inspiring piece that captures nature in its awakening. A picturesque vision that is memorable to the heart. Very nice work Cherrie.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Carlos