Coaxing Tomorrow

With care let us ease the day away,
and before we close the door to rest,
sing to tomorrow a greeting of care.
Let a tender voice be offered.
Coaxing her to yield her golden rays.
While we determine,
in our own heart.
To make the most of the new day.

Reviews

[Tom]

Yep indeed, time is precious and not to be taken for granted and/or used idly, lets sing with the morning bird as another new day dawns ..

[Cherrie L Bill]

Good morning 🌄 Tom and thank you. It seems each new day holds its own poem. Always the same and wonderfully different.

[Tom]

Indeed so, and welcome, welcome you are Cherrie 🌞

[Ken e Bujold]

your opening line stirred my mind to Dylan T, which is about as stirring a tribute as I can give. With a master's hand, you have crafted a remarkable 8 lines to natural rhythms of time, nature and self awareness.

ken

[Cherrie L Bill]

Wow and thank you for such a grand reference. I could only wish. :)

[red93]

Excellent Cherrie lovely positivity and again you are one of the Champions of brevity on the Writers Cafe Site ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie L Bill]

I never strive to keep my poems short. They just are. :)

[red93]

✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Ruth Martz]

A beautiful well written poem🙏🌹

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Ruth 😊

[Stuart Munro]

Cherrie , Make the most of the Day , or any day , Great Poem I enjoyed reading

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really love the positive nature of this poem Any day I wake up ia a good day to me.

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you my friend

[Betty Hermelee]

The songbird knows and informs us to rest the night, let our senses relax and know in our hearts that tomorrow we will make this day even better. The sun's rays will shine upon us as we awaken to it's warmth.
Beautiful!
Best, B

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you Betty

[Betty Hermelee]

you"re very welcome Cherrie!

[Crowley]

This is exactly what is needed. You have that soft touch when you need it. I find it amazing.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Hello Crowley
and thank you.

[Relic]

This almost resembles a meditation to me. We all need some care for any new day. This is soft and comforting to read, Cherrie. Nicely done.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you
What have you been up to?

[Relic]

Probate is almost over, trying to find more time to write. Time will tell. :)

[Cherrie L Bill]

Yes finding time to write is complicated.

[Pete]

quite soothing. good advice for all. i've always liked that word, "coax". wonderful thoughts to pull up the covers on a spent day and pull them down to welcome a new one. with the right resolve, anything is possible ... :)