Love's Gift

Quatrain abcd bedf egfh

From Heaven's gate I swore to follow.
You lead the way and time did pass.
Your Earthly walk starts without me,
and from Heaven's portal a path is set.

You lead the way and time did pass.
Now, our search begins at last,
and from Heaven's portal a path is set.
As a promise made illuminates the path.

Now, our search begins at last.
Souls united is our plea.
As a promise made illuminates our task,
and joining hearts, claim love's gift.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem shared dear Cherrie. We hope we find our proper place one day. I liked the gentle flow of words leading to the strong ending. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie L Bill]

Good Morning, and thank you I really like this form and should break it out more often.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good evening from cold and snowy Michigan.

[William Michael Reeves]

That's pretty cool. The poem and the form. No name for it? Just quatrains with advancing lines? Maybe it's a Palmerelle?

[Cherrie L Bill]

I didn't not see an additional name listed for this a Palmerella (sounds like a cigar).

[William Michael Reeves]

Smokin' poetry!

[Cherrie L Bill]

Well since we got smoke grab the marshmallows and I'll get a stick.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Interesting use of repetition, somewhat like a villanelle but not. I like it.
W.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Ya know I did too. I've written these before, but this time I focused on a-h as a story then just applied the rules.

[red93]

A pilgrimage for lovers - I like this a lot. Nicely worded and well put together. Excellent.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you 😊

[Lisasview]

Hi Cherrie,
Lovely rhyme which I loved as I do love structure in a poem.
Connecting in life is so important...
Your words show that so well...
Lisa, now on holiday in Northern Spain

[Cherrie L Bill]

Well happy holidays 😌 and thank you.

[Lisasview]

Hi Cherrie,
You are most welcome!
Lisa, enjoying this area in Spain

[Lathen Griffiths]

Really nice, I didn’t check out the format , but rather just read it off the cuff but it worked so well, I believe your theme here of what seems like a quest helps, there is a journey happening within your lines.

All the best

Lathen

[Cherrie L Bill]

I added a response last night 🌙 only to see cyber travel has been lost in space.
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read moreI added a response last night 🌙 only to see cyber travel has been lost in space.
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Thank you for stopping and reading. I also like to save the extra information and reviews for after the read for a genuine impression.

[Relic]

It would take me weeks to figure out how to do these. haha This makes sense and I see how the lines jump from one place to another. This has a nice sentiment too. Well done, Cherrie.

[Cherrie L Bill]

I really liked writing it.
I I let A-G tell the story in order and the repeated lines just kind of echo the thought.
I think you would be great at one of these.