Like a Rag doll

My feet cannot dance.
My voice will not sing.
My heart it does sleep.
Though I struggle to find peace. ..
Waiting for your kiss.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This has a strange weariness and longing to it. A powerful write in a few words. Well done. F.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you my friend. I wrote it shortly after my husband died.

[Amy R]

Oh my,
such a powerful write.

"My heart it does sleep.
Though I struggle to find peace. ..
Waiting for your kiss."

I love this. very nice
-Amy

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Amy. Grief is sometimes a hard emotion to express and I wanted a lefthanded way to show it.

[Amy R]

Yes, it is definitely hard to express but u did it so well. :) You're welcome.

[Visions_of_Insanity]

Beautifully written. The execution is flawless.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Vision :)

[red93]

Love this Cherrie. I guess we have all felt like this at times. Perfectly achieved ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Tony. :)

[NormaZ]

Lovely depiction of despair and yearning. You captured the emotions really well

[Cherrie L Bill]

Maybe to well. It's been a tough and long winter.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie… from rags to riches… just a few Pearls for your loving 💜 Heart… a Diamond Ring to bring the Sparkle from the Sun… Kisses… in the Wind… my friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

So much melancholy pour into a few short lines conveying the heartbreak that won’t allow the heart to sleep nor the mind to find peace

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you. It's been a tough few months. I'm just trying to find my feet again.

[Poetic Beauty]

One step, one breath at a time. Feel the emotions acknowledge them and let them free. It takes time hang in there

[Anita Frader]

Lifeless with the force that brings us alive.
Love. 💛

[Relic]

We find words to describe things because our hearts speak the words and we listen. I feel the sadness in this.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Sad poetry is not my favorite. But I seem to be hovering there on the corner teardrop Blvd and sorrow

[Relic]

I'm sorry to hear that, Cherrie. I hope you find sunny outlook road soon.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you so very much

[Neville]

.. this is really quite lovely Cherrie .. Neville

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Neville 😊