Bids her Come

Perched on the edge, I see her feathered skirt ruffle.

With an outstretched neck the little bird leans into uncertainty.

Until the tiny zephyr bids her come.

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherry... the Wisp of a little Bird flying into uncertainty is
also true with a Poet who risks line by line to find the perfect rhyme. softly, Pat

[Patricia]

visually beauty to this with just a bit anxiety with the little bird leaning into uncertainty...this says a lot with so few words. lovely writing Miss Cherrie.

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Pat it is a thrill to see a fledgling leap into the unknown

[red93]

So interesting what one can do with the 3 line format when one steps outside the parameters of 5-7-5. 'zephyr' is a lovely word with its many classical associations. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Tony :) I hope you are doing well and yes, like you I like the a simple three liner.

[emmajoygreen]

Few words but delightful, visual and beckoning. You have captured reality with your charming; representatives and left a magical footprint, Cherrie. Smiling. You have created a beautiful visual, dear friend .

The sun smiles and I wonder how you are, if you are waking to bright moments and warmth in your your days. Hope so.

Warmest wishes. my friend

(Super elegant reading glasses, too)

[Cherrie L Bill]

Emma dear I'm doing well. Life is pretty busy at the moment. I'm hoping July will slow down. Bur I've been busy in a good way and knocking around the idea for a short story for children. You have been a true friend and sister through this journey.

[Davidgeo]

You are pretty good at this writing thing.

[Cherrie L Bill]

:) thank you David. I'm getting out of practice of late. I've been so busy. I can't wait to get back at it.

[Betty Hermelee]

I love to watch birds, especially when there may be a mating call....they anticipate and wait and then some friend comes to their open arms....very vivid and meaningful..
Warmly, B

[Cherrie L Bill]

Thank you Betty:) I'm with you waiting birds and nature is a great past time.

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome
Warmly, B.