Alluded

Countless spirits descended
As my soul abated

Crowding out my day
Heavy eyelids encumbered

Not my heart
just my sight

As a restful sleep
Alluded.

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

Still writing like a master, master. Write this world into order, more now than ever sir.

[Cherrie-Bill]

I find my topics seem to cling to nature these days but I’ve always found it to be my safe space.
And thank you for such a generous compliment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Being an English teacher, "alluded" is one of my favorite words.
The heart needs its rest...
And if our soul is in a state of serenity, our sleep will be sweet dreams.
j.

[Cherrie-Bill]

Since I wrote of a happy blue yesterday I decided to make this state of blue a little more stormy 🌊. 😊
Now you will need to put your favorite word to pen 🖊️

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh boy, an assignment. I will work on doing a poem sprung from that word. Thanks for the assignment but more importantly, for your lovely write.
j.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Okie Dokie, Cherrie....
I am posting the poem now inspired by your use of Alluded as your title.

[Cherrie-Bill]

You know I’ve been reading Dana Gioia and have started some of his lectures. Which are awesome. Maybe I’m ready to start writing ✍️ again every day.
I’ve always written about life and living and have to learn my new flow.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am sure you will, Cherrie, and very soon.
Your talent will go to the head of the class.