Sorrow

a heavy heart

Sorrow

 

Sorrow is a dry and lonely soil

And when in the depths of it you toil

The tears of the heart are evaporated away

Even before they fall

 

 

Reviews

[Henry Clemmons]

A sorrow no one can even see because of evaporating tears. Yes, sorrow is lonely as long as we remain. Good write. Enjoyed.

[Samuel Dickens]

Yes, not much good fruit can be expected from sorrow. It does, however, show that you have a heart.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A small poem with a Big meaning!! Your words speaks hear felt truth!

[Ladysue]

this is really good. you have captured so much in so little words...I agree with cowboy in all that he said..good writing...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When the heart is deprived of nutrients it has nothing left to give in return... a lot of emotions summed up in this small poem.

[Jim Parson]

Sounds like someone is going through a drought. I say throw some water on that soil. What a beautiful and meaningful write! You have such a fantastic ability to say so much in so few words. This is so intelligent. I just love it.

[Raymond]

Very nice...and very true...I like how much you captured in four lines

[Ed Hart]

here, let me rub your shoulders